Thursday, August 15, 2013

Working title: the doctor
Written by: ajaib singh
Synopsis
(Logline: Doctor is like god. Think again!!)

Nisha comes to live with her sister- Rakshita  and jija -Somesh. She has got a job in a magzine publication recently in the city and therefore has moved here.
Nisha settles in the family and joins her new job. She makes friend with Jivisha at her office. Jivisha  introduces her to  Naitik the computer operator who is a reserved guy and does not interact much with people albeit in professional ways.
Soon a mysterious person begins to appear in Nisha’s room at night while she sleeps. Nisha doesn’t notice it. The person appears simply to stand in dark and look at sleeping Nisha.
One day Rakshita gets a sprain in her foot. Somesh calls his friend Daksh who is doctor. Daksh comes and treats Rakshita. As soon as Daksh sees Nisha he gets obsessed with her. He begins thinking of her all the time.
Once Daksh mixes  Salmonella bacteria in a chocolate and places it  in Nisha’s drawer.  Nisha eats the chocolate and falls sick. She is taken to Daksh’s home cum clinic. Daksh begins his treatment and  strikes a  friendship with Nisha. While at Daksh’s house Nisha hears some mysterious noises occasionally but Daksh checks and tells her that they were made by mice.
In the office there are little and professional  interactions with Nisha and Naitik. Once Jivisha invites Nisha to a nearby lake for boating. While in boat Nisha accidentally falls in water. Naitik is also nearby who sees it and saves Nisha who doesn’t know swimming. After relaxing at Naitik’s house Nisha leaves in her car. She finds Naitik’s diary in her car and reads it. She comes to know why Naitik is so reserved and doesn’t interact much with people. She learns that in the past Naitik had tried to steal money from the office where he uses to work previously for the treatment of his mother. But he was arrested and sent to jail. His mother died subsequently. Now he  feels responsible for his mother’s death and is guilt ridden.
Next time Nisha meets naitik. She takks to him and makes him realise that he was not responsible for his mother’s death. In fact he tried his best to save her. And it all was destiny. No one can change it. With this Naitik feels connected to Nisha. He finds her  understanding and caring. He expresses his love to her which she accepts happily.
Next night Nisha finds the mysterious man. It was Somesh her jija ji who was sitting on her bed near her. But Somesh runs away when Nisha opens her eyes. Nisha becomes very disturb with this. She wants to talk to Naitik but he was gone to his home-town for his mother’s barsi. She then talks to Daksh about it.
Daksh says that perhaps Somesh will realise this and will stop coming to her room from now on. But it proves to be wrong. Next night Somesh touches Nisha who wakes up. She says she will tell to Rakshita.
Somesh is guilt ridden. He drives to Daksh at once and asks for help. Daksh scolds him for stalking and touching Nisha who belongs to him only. Daksh’s revelation shocks Somesh but for short time. Suddenly Daksh gives Somesh an injection and he faints. Daksh then strangles Somesh and hangs him on a tree in front of Someh’s house to make it appear like a suicide.
Nisha talks to Naitik about all this. He advices her that now Somesh is dead and she need not tell anything to Rakshita since it will make her more sad.
One day Nisha meets Daksh who proposes her. But she says she has got a boyfriend now. It makes Daksh very angry and all the more crazy. He goes and loosens the nuts of Nisha’s car brakes. Nisha meets a minor accident but is not injured. Daksh was stalking her. He brings her to his home. She says she is alright but Daksh gives her an injection and she faints. Daksh then breaks Nisha’s leg with a hammer. When she wakes up she finds her leg broken. She was shocked. She said she was allright. But Daksh says that she has not realised it but her leg was broken in the accident itself.
When Nisha asks to inform Rakshita Daksh says he has informed her but she has gone out of town. At the same time he calls Rakshita and says Nisha has gone for a trip with her friends for one week.
Daksh starts Nisha’s treatment which is not reliable. One day he says he is going to town to bring plaster of paris for her. In his absence Nisha crawls out of bed. She hears the mysterious noises again and explores the house. She finds a basement. She goes there and find a badly tortured and mutilated girl inside a metallic cage. The noises were of cage shaken by the girl. The girl tells her to run away or Daksh will kill her also. The girl then dies. Nisha is deeply terrified. She hears Daksh’s car outside. She crawls back to her bed.
Meanwhile Jivisha goes to Rakshita’s house to know where was Nisha. But Rakshita informs her that she was gone to a trip. Jivisha finds it strange. With who will Nisha  go to trip. She is her only friend here.
While driving back home Jivisha finds the damaged car of Nisha hidden in the bushes. She looks at Daksh’s house which was nearby. She goes there. Daksh sees her from the window. Jivisha goes inside the house. She reaches a storage. She opens an almirah and a dead body of a girl falls down. She is horrified. Just then Daksh hits her with an axe. Jivisha dies there. Daksh goes back. However some life was left in Jivisha. She manages to phone to Naitik and utter some words about daksh and his address. She then dies.
Daksh goes to Nisha and tells her that he wants to marry her. He brings her mother’s wedding clothes to her. And dresses her up. He starts a fire as havn in a tray in the room. He makes Nisha sit on wheel chair and starts taking seven feras. He chants marriage mantras himself. After it he puts Nisha on the floor and tries to rape her. Just then Naitik reaches. He starts beating Daksh black and blue.
Daksh falls near bed. Naitik is about to kill him but Daksh pleads with him to save some time. Daksh finds an injection near bed and stabs Naitik in the leg. Naitik faints and falls. Daksh then takes the knife and is about to stab him. Just then a scalpel (a type of knife) penetrates through Daksh’s throat. Nisha has stabbed him with scalpel. Daksh dies and falls on the floor.
Nisha finds her phone and calls the police. Naitik wakes up after some time. He hugs Nisha and she reciprocates. Police arrives. Naitik and Nisha are taken to hospital for treatment.

The end


Sunday, June 2, 2013




Double Dose


FADE IN…


INT. LIVING ROOM 1 – DAY


Vinay, 20 is sitting on sofa and reading newspaper. In nearby sofa his friend Sanjeev also 20 is lying and reading a magzine.
Just then Vinay looks at next page and his eyes get spread with surprise.

VINAY
Hey buddy, what is this date
rape drug exactly?


Sanjeev keeps reading.


VINAY
Asking you dude!!


Sanjeev  throws a leaf of tablets at Vinay.


SANJEEV
This is it.


Vinay catches the leaf and looks shocked.


VINAY
What!! What is this?


Sanjeev gets up in his sofa and stifles a yawn.


SANJEEV
              This is called date rape
drug.

VINAY
Really!!

Vinay looks at the drug carefully and tries to read.


VINAY
How is it used ?



SANJEEV
Nothing. Just slip in girl’s
drink. That’s it.



VINAY
Can’t be found out by taste?


SANJEEV
Nopes. It doesn’t have any taste.
It’s tasteless.


VINAY
No change in drinks’ color!!

SANJEEV
No. Colorless too.


VINAY
And what happens after taking it?

SANJEEV
Well. The one who takes it falls
asleep. And meanwhile anything happens
to him he or she will not know.


VINAY
O really! A girl won’t even know if
she is raped.


SANJEEV
Asshole. That’s why it is called  date
rape drug.

VINAY
But how yar! How’s it possible? Why
the girl won’t know anything?



SANJEEV
Well, when the person who has taken the
drug wakes up he doesn’t remember anything.
He suffers from retrograde amnesia.


VINAY
Suffer from what?

SANJEEV
Retrograde amnesia.

VINAY
Hmmm. By the way, what is this drug
doing with you?


Vinay looks at Sanjeev with a smile. Sanjeev snatches the leaf from Vinay.


SANJEEV
Just mind your business. O.K.

Sanjeev then goes to another room.


INT. BEDROOM – DAY

Komal, 20 is lying on bed, in front of her laptop. She is looking at the picture of a boy on facebook site. Her friend Zoya, 20 is sitting on chair and copying something from a copy to her copy. Zoya looks at komal.

ZOYA
Komal, What are you looking at?

KOMAL
Nothing. Looking at my dream boy.

Zoya keeps her copies aside.


ZOYA
Do you believe in such online
Relations! Do they even persist?

KOMAL
Ya. why not? Afterall people who
are online are also people. They
are not ghosts. And they also have
feelings.

ZOYA
But there can be people of all
kind – fraud, criminal, desperates.
How can you trust them?

KOMAL
Well one can always make out who
is who. And Kunal is not like this.

ZOYA

Well have you met him face to
face.



KOMAL
Not yet. But he is insisting.


ZOYA
So you wanna go to meet him ?


KOMAL
Ya thinking.

ZOYA
Meet him in public place first.

KOMAL
He says he stays alone and wants
me to meet him at his place only.


Zoya simply looks at Komal.


INT. BATHROOM – DAY

Ruby beautiful girl of 24, is taking shower in her bathroom.


INT. BEDROOM – DAY

Ruby comes to her room. She looks at the calendar. She takes a marker and rounds of 11th April, 2013. She picks a dress lying on her bed and looks at mirror.


INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY

Ruby comes to living room. She picks up her red purse and goes out of the room.


INT. RISHAB’S BEDROOM – DAY

Rishab, 25 is sitting on sofa. He picks an envelope lying on sofa and tears it. There is money in it. He counts the money and puts it in his wallet. He then goes to the wardrobe and keeps the wallet in the back-pocket of his jeans.

He then goes to the table. A laptop is lying there. He inserts the leads of the charger in the switchboard.

He then goes to other room.


INT. RISHAB’S BATHROOM – DAY

Rishab is taking shower.


INT. RISHAB’S LIVING ROOM – DAY

Rishab comes in the room. He wears a red T-shirt and blue jeans. He applies some lotion to his face and combs his hairs. Just then we hear door-bell ringing. Rishab runs towards the door.



INT. RISHAB’S LIVING ROOM/DOOR – DAY

Rishab opens the door. Ruby is standing there. Rishab and Ruby look at each other.

RUBY
               Hey!!

RISHAB
               Hi!

Rishab keeps looking at beautiful Ruby.






RUBY
What?


RISHAB
Nn..nothing. You are more beautiful
than your photo on facebook.


RUBY
Ha ha. Really! Thanks. Now will
you keep me standing here only or?


RISHAB
Oh..sorry.. please come in.

Rishab and Ruby come inside.


INT. RISHAB’S LIVING ROOM – DAY

Rishab and Ruby sit on sofa in front of each other.

RISHAB
 So how do you find me?

RUBY
Little nervous.

RISHAB
Oh..ha ha. Ya I get nervous in
front of beautiful girls. Well
otherwise did you like me?

RUBY
Ya. I have liked you. That’s why
I have come to meet you.

RISHAB
Well that was online. What about now,
in person?

RUBY
You are not bad. I like you.

RISHAB
Oh Thank you (smiles.


RUBY
Well I am feeling little thirsty.

RISHAB
Oh sorry sorry. I am so stupid.
Please wait. I will just come.

Rishab gets up and goes to kitchen.


INT. RISHAB’S KITCHEN – DAY

Rishab take two glasses. He takes out a coca-cola bottle from the fridge and pours in two glasses. In one of the glass he then slips a pill and stirs it. He puts a straw in that glass. He puts the glasses on a tray and goes out of the kitchen.


INT. RISHAB’S LIVING ROOM – DAY

Rishab keeps the tray on the table. He gives the glass with straw to ruby.
RUBY
Thanks.

Ruby then shows a drawing to Rishab crossing over the other glass.
RUBY
Have you made this sketch?

Rishab takes the sketch and looks at it.

RISHAB
Ya.


RUBY
Really it’s awesome.


RISHAB
Oh thanks.


RUBY
Can I keep this one?




RISHAB
Sure sure.

RUBY
Thanks.

Ruby puts the sketch in her purse. She then takes the glass of coca-cola.

RUBY
              You also have.

RISHAB
              Ya ..ya.

Rishab takes the other glass and starts sipping. He looks at Ruby with caution.

RUBY
So don’t you get bored alone?


RISHAB
Ya. But what can one do? Have to
live.

RUBY
So what do you do all day long?

RISHAB
Nothing much. After coaching if I
have spare time I make sketches.
And then chat with you on fb.

RUBY
Ha ha. So when is your exam starting..


Just then ruby keeps her hand on her fore-head.  

RISHAB
What happened? Are you ok?

RUBY
What have you added in it?

RISHAB
What ..what are you saying…

Ruby puts both of her hands on each side of her head. She looks at Rishab. His face looks blurred. But she can see he is smiling wickedly.


INT. RISHAB’S LIVING ROOM – DAY

Rishab smiles. He then finishes his glass in one gulp.
He lifts Ruby and  carries her towards  bedroom.


INT. RISHAB’S BEDROOM – DAY

Rishab brings Ruby in the bedroom and puts her on the bed. He takes his T-shirt off. He then starts opening the buttons of her shirt. The screen then goes black.


INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY

The screen opens again. Clock tells us time 6.00 pm. The calander tells us date 12th April. We see Rishab is lying on the bed. Slowly he gets up. He keeps his hands on the sides of his heads. He looks at the room. It looks blurry but soon it becomes clear.

Rishab gets up and looks here and there.
He goes and checks his pocket. He takes out the wallet and checks it. It’s empty.


RISHAB
Oh shit.

He looks at the charger of laptop. But the camera shows there is only lead. The laptop is missing. Rishab looks angry and shocked.

He then looks at the table. The red purse of the girl is still there. He searches the purse. He finds a leaf of date rape drug inside from which two pills are missing. He lifts his glass and tries to make a connection.


FLASHBACK


INT. RISHAB’S LIVING ROOM – DAY

Rishab keeps the tray on the table. He gives the glass with straw to ruby.
RUBY
Thanks.

Ruby then shows a drawing to Rishab which hides the other glass.
RUBY
Have you made these sketches?


Rishab takes the sketch and looks at it.

Just then Ruby puts TWO PILLS in his coca- cola.

RISHAB
Ya.


RUBY
Really. You make awesome sketches.



INT. RISHAB’S BEDROOM – DAY

Rishab is standing near the bed.


RISHAB
Oh shit. Oh shit.

Rishab slowly sinks to the floor against bed and keeps behaving as desperate psycho beating bed.


THE END


Wednesday, March 20, 2013

serial plot


XX
Vishambhar is the sarpanch of smajpur panchayat. He is very strict and cruel. Day after another he gives different kind of punishments for small things.
At home his wife bhanumati is the dictator. Both vishambahar and bhanumati have three sons. Pratap , samar and raghuvir. Pratap and samar are married to dhara and vidaya. Both of them have only daughters- surbhi and palak.  Due to this bhanumati and vishamabahr are very angry with both daughters in laws. And everytime they treat them badly.
Vishambahar has a factory. Pratap is alcoholic and all the day he is found in daaru ka theka.  Samar and raghuvir go to factory office.
All sons are dominating and cruel towards their wives and daughters.
The family is against girl’s education. Therefore they have stopped surbhi from sending to school after she completed fifth. And they ask her to clean the house, kitchen work and other house chores.
Very soon raghuvir’s marriage is going to take place. Bhanumati has given the list of dowry items to rajni’s father. He keeps his home girbi to buy motor-cycle for raghuvir. Rajni feels quite guilty at hier parents condition.
XX
Soon the marriage takes place. And rajni comes home. Bhanumati asks her to deliver  baby boy one day. very soon rajni comes to know about the conditions of house. dhara is treated very badly because she is from poor family. but vidya is treated well because she is from rich family and has brought good dowry. She has been given good room. but both dhara and vidya are friendly with each other behind the back of bhanumati.
XX
Vikram goes to agriculture depot. And buys all the fare price products and supplies to his own stores.
At home he tries to assault his maid kastoori when his wife is away.
Kastori goes home and cries. Her daughter meera takes her to sarpanch house.
Vikram is already there. Sarpanch asks for panchayat on Sunday.
Sarpanch asks her to be kala munh karke to be paraded in village.
Meera looks at her mother and cries.
XX
Surbhi and palak goes to market. On the way back home viraj stops them. she gives a letter to surbhi which she tears off. he tries to pull surbhi from wrist. Palak beats him with a stick on his head. And then both girls run away home.
Viraj meets his friend Nakul and expresses his likeness for surbhi.
XX
One day pratap tries to beat dhara and suffers a heart attack. He dies while way of hospital.
One day bhanumati asks a pandit to bring a rishta for surbhi. Pandit brings a rishta of widow lawyer of 35. His mother is angry. She says no first time. Bhanumati beats her.
One night dhara alongwith surbhi run away from her home to city.
She starts working in house of a kind lady and starts sending her daughter to school again.
XX
At home vidya sends her daughter to her nani’s house which is in city. So that she could get good education.
XX
Meanwhile a pimp lures meera to give job and sells her to a massage parlor. She accepted her fate and wants revenge from vikram and vishambhar one day.
XX
Ambika suffers constant harassment at her office. Her senior constantly stares her. Her boss puts lots of pressure on her and when she can not complete the assignments makes indecent offers to her. ambika is in constant pressure. One day she attempted suicide by eating sleeping pills. She is saved in time. Raghav helps them to take her to hospital. Both viraj and raghav becomes good friend.
After much pressure ambika tells viraj about her workplace harassment. Viraj and raghva alongwith their friends beat both the senior and the boss. this lands them in jail. but vikram helps them come out by bribing the police officer.
XX
After 10 years:
Surbhi comes back as police inspector. She stops the illegal activities. But vikram goons and vishambahrs goons make her life difficult. They insult her also.
Meanwhile vikram meet surbhi and falls in love with her. but viraj is already in love with her.
When both friends come to know  that they like same girl their friendship breaks apart. And their competition starts to win surbhi.
Vikram and vishambhar makes a plot. They keep drugs in her house and surbhi is suspended from her job. She is arrested and put in jail.
XX
All of a sudden a lady lawyer comes to defend her in the court. She is palak her cousin.
Palak starts her investigation. She do a drama and tricks vikram. She says she loves him. but vikram says she loves some other girl. He doesn’t know that surbhi and palak are cousins. raghav helps her in investigation.
 she found the number of drug dealer in vikram’s cell phone. And reached upto him. with the help of viraj they makes him reveal the truth. Dealer tells that vikram has bought the drugs and asks him to put in surbhi’s bag.
Wins.
Raghav hates his father.
XX
Surbhi says she love viraj. Vikram becomes loner.


XX
Vikram proposes palak. She said she just cheated him. and tells that how his father tried to rape kastoori and then with vishambhar insulted her more by blackening her face.
Vikram is heart broken. He starts drinking alcohol. His mother reena comes to him and tries to consul him. raghav says that he hates his father. But reena tells he is not his father. She tells that she was in love with other boy. she was pregnanat and going to marry that boy but vikram forcefully married with her. raghav was shocked but relaxed. He said his mental pressure is relievd.
later palak starts feeling love for him.
XX
Young cousin.
Bhanumati arrested for abortion.
XX
Meera starts love affair with vikram. And makes a cd.
she meets vishambhar also.
XX
She then sends cd to surbhi. She comes to arrest vikram in the case of rape. He kills himself.
XX
Meera blackmails  vishambhar and ask her to marry her. He agrees. In the night bhanumati kills her and vishambhar kills bhanumati.
Kastoori takes rakh and blackesn vishambhars face. Police takes him through the street. Just once she has done with kastoori.