Saturday, August 25, 2012

Part 1.

Fade in…

Int. Bedroom – Night
We see a young woman – Surbhi - in her early 30’s having a troubled sleep. She is supposedly having some nightmare. Her body is writhing. And her face is contorted with sadness and gloom.
Camera focuses on her closed eyes and we are inside in  her dream.

Ext. Deserted road – Night
We see a man walking on the deserted road. The man is Promod, owner of an investment company recently gone bankrupted.

Ext. Deserted road – Night, continued
Now we see Surbhi from back. The camera shows us the knife she is holding.
She is chasing the man walking in front of her.

Ext. Deserted road – Night, continued
The man reaches a black Honda city. He opens the door but just then looks at Surbhi who has reached near to him. He is surprised and stops getting inside the car.

The man
Hey. Surbhi! What are you
doing at this time here?


Surbhi
I have come to punish you for
your sins you bastard.

Surbhi raises her hand holding a knife. The knife shines in the moonlight. Surbhi then brings the knife with force and stabs Promod in his heart.
We hear a loud scream of Promod.

Int. Bedroom – Night
Surbhi wakes up from her night mare. She is frightened and startled. She is panting. Drops of sweat are glistening on her forehead.
Surbhi looks on her side. Her husband Puneet is sleeping at ease. She gets up and goes out of the room.

Int. Kitchen - Night
Surbhi opens the fridge and takes out water bottle. Surbhi pours water in the glass and drinks. Surbhi goes to the gallery.

Int. Gallery/Kids room – Night
Surbhi is at the doorstep of kid’s room. Inside we see her two kids – a girl of 14 – Shreya, and a boy of 10 – Anuj, enjoying a calm sleep. Surbhi goes back to her room.

Int. Bedroom – Night
Surbhi comes in the room and goes back to sleep.



Int. Dining room – Morning.
Puneet is on the dining table. He is having breakfast of bread butter and boiled eggs. Surbhi comes from kitchen with toast and a jug of orange juice.
Surbhi sits on the chair beside Puneet. She holds her head with one hand.

Puneet
What happened? Did you sleep alright.

Puneet took a swig of orange juice.

Surbhi
Ya. I am O.K.

Puneet
Why are you looking distressed ?

Surbhi
Nothing. Headache.

Puneet
So take a disprin.

Surbhi
Ya I will. You need anything.


Puneet
No. No. Kids are slept yet?

Surbhi
Ya. I will get them ready. It’s
getting time.

Puneet finishes breakfast and gets up.
Puneet and Surbhi walks toward living room.

Int. Living room – Morning.
Puneet and Surbhi are walking out of the living room.

Puneet
Ok. I leave now. Bye.

Puneet opens the door and goes out.

Surbhi
Bye.

Surbhi closes the door and comes in living room.




Int. Kid’s room – Morning.
We see Shreya and Anuj still sleeping in their beds. Surbhi enters the room.
Surbhi goes to Shreya and shakes her.

Surbhi
Shreya get up. It’s getting
late for school beta.

Shreya gets up yawning and goes out of the room.
Surbhi goes to Anuj and shakes him too.

Surbhi
Get up beta.

Anuj just turns on his side.

Anuj(in sleep)
Let me sleep mummy.

Surbhi
Hey. It’s getting late baby.
Come on.. come on. Get up.

Surbhi turns Anuj on his back. Anuj puts his arm around Surbhi. Surbhi picks Anuj up and goes out of the room.
Int.Office – Day
This is the office of a Metroweek magazine. Puneet works here as executive editor. Just then a man – the chief editor enters. The man goes towards his office. All the employees wish him good morning and he replies the same.

Int. Office, Cabin of Puneet - Day
We see Puneet in the cabin, busy marking something on a file. The cabin is small but beautiful. Fully furnished with a wall size glass window on one side with curtains.
Just then Puneet’s friend and colleague Aakash enters the cabin.

Aakash
Hey. What’s up?

Puneet
Nothing much.

Puneet keeps reading and marking on the file.
Aakash sits on the table.

Aakash
I was thinking to go and meet
Pramod.

Puneet
What’s the use. We are already
ruined.

Aakash
Yaar. We haven’t met the asshole
second time. At least we could
check with him and know what’s the
current situation.

Puneet
We know what happens in such situations.

Puneet kind of throw the file on his desk and sits straight to talk to Aakash.
Aaksah gets up and goes to window. He then comes back near Puneet’s desk.

Aakash
But what’s the harm in going
and meeting him. Maybe we
could get at least …at least
…half of our money back.

Puneet
Half……

Aakash
Maybe one third. After all 20
lakhs is not a small amount.

We must ask the bastard if something has been done so faror what.

Puneet
I don’t think anything will happen
now.

Aakash
Yaar. I am sorry. I am feeling guilty
about it. It happens because of me.
I was the one who told you about this.

Puneet
Don’t take it on you yaar. I got
greedy.I wanted to buy a big house
so without much thinking did hastily.

Aakash
But who has thought about it. After
all he was a friend or better acquaintance from college.

Puneet
Hmmm.


Aakash
So are you coming.


Puneet
Ok. If you are insisting will come
along. But I am not so much hopeful

Aakash
Ok. Then. After office. Be ready.

Puneet
Ok.

Aakash goes out of the cabin. Puneet goes to window and looks outside.

Int. Car - Day
Aakash is Dr.iving the car. Beside him Puneet is sitting.

Aakash
How’s Surbhi.

Puneet
She is also gretly affected due
to all this.

Aakash
Same is with Gaytri.She has not
smiled since it has happened.

Puneet
Hmmm..


The car is driving through snake like road. Buildings and trees are left behind.

Ext. Pramod house - Day
Aakash rings the doorbell. The door is opened by Pramod’s wife – Sunanda. She is appearing in distress.

Sunanda
Yes.

Aakash
Is Pramod home.

Sunanda
Ya. You are?

Aakash
We are his friends.

Sunanda steps aside. Aakash and Puneet goes inside. Sunanda shuts the door.

Int. Living room – Day

Sunanda
He is in bedroom.

Sunanda leads them to bedroom and opens the bedroom’s door.

Int. Pramod bedroom’s door – Day
We see a hospital like setting.
Aakash and Puneet goes inside the bedroom. They are bit surprised.

Int. Pramod bedroom – Day
Pramod who is appearing sick is lying on bed. On one side there is glucose bottle hanging on a tripod along with a catheter. There is bandage on his wrist. A nurse is filling an injection.

Pramod
Oh.. Aakash and Puneet. Come come.
Please sit. Just a minute.

Nurse gives the injection on Pramod;s left arm.
Puneet and Aakash sits on nearby chairs. Nurse then leaves.

Puneet
What happened?

Pramod
Nothing much.

Sunanda
He got heart attack last week.

Pramod
It’s nothing. It’s only a minor.
Sunanda please bring some tea.

Aakash
That’s not required.

Sunanda leaves the room.

Pramod
I am sorry friends.I know you have
come to know about the money. Really
I tried my best but… coudn’t
do anything and you are looking at
my condition, you can imagine how
much stress I was under.

Pramod Dr.inks water from nearby glass.

Pramod
Yar it never happened for past five
years. I showed you every record.
you worself met people who have got
their money doubled. but this time..
god only knows what went wrong.the
entire company was to go bankrupt.

Sunanda enters with tea.

Sunanda
Don’t talk so much. Doctor has asked
you to take rest.

Sunanda keeps the tray on table and give tea cups to Aakash and Puneet.

Int. Car - Day
Aakash is driving the car.

Aakash
Seen. Another Dr.ama of the bastard.

Puneet
Really.

Aakash
He must be pretending it. I don’t
think he has got any heart attack.

Puneet
God knows.

Aakash
What  god knows. He is like
this only stupid asshole.This is
his one big Dr.ama only. Just
to avoid investors who must be
banging his head.

Puneet
Ya. May be.What about his other
partner.

Aakash
That Ramesh. Sala he is missing.
god knows where he have fled to.
I just want to kill both
of these bastards.Just murder them.

Ext. Puneet’s house - Evening
Aakash stops the car. Puneet gets down.

Puneet
Come inside. Have a cup of tea.

Aakash
It’s ok yaar. Next time. Gaytri
must be waiting.

Puneet
Chal ok. take care.

Aakash
ok.

Aakash drives off.
Puneet starts walking toward the house.

Int./Ext. Living room – Evening
Doorbell rings. Surbhi comes and opens the door. Puneet comes inside.
Surbhi takes his briefcase.

Puneet
How was the day.

Puneet touchs Surbhi on the cheek.

Surbhi
It was good. You go and change.
I will bring tea.

Surbhi goes to kitchen.

Int. Living room - Day
Puneet is now in changed clothes – t shirt and adidas pyjamas.He is sitting on sofa and checking some TV chaneels. Just then Surbhi comes with tea tray.
Puneet switches off the TV.
Surbhi sits on the mat and makes tea. She gives one cup to Puneet and takes one for herself.

Puneet
We went to promod’s place today.

Surbhi(with surprise)
What he said?

Puneet
Had got a heart attack.

Surbhi
Really!!!

Puneet
May be… or may be he is pretending.

Surbhi
He must be pretending then. He
is such a con. But god will
definitely punish him for his doing.

Puneet
Well you don’t be stressed now. where
are the kids?

Surbhi
Playing out.

Int. Dining room – Night
Surbhi is picking up the empty plates and bowls of dinner  they just had.
Puneet is sitting on sofa with Anuj in his lap. Shreya is also sitting nearby.
Puneet is telling them some story.

Anuj
Then what happened.The devil ate
the boy?

Puneet
No. The boy was having telekinetic
powers.

Shreya
What is telekinetic powers daddy?

Puneet
The power with which one can lift
anything with his or her eyes.

Anuj
Oh. Really. Wao. Then?

Puneet
The boy lifted the knife lying on the
table and stabbed the devil. The devil
was dead.

Anuj(happily)
Yeeyyy.

Anuj and Shreya clapped.

Just then Surbhi comes there.

Surbhi
Ok. Kids time to go to bed.


Anuj
Good Night daddy.

Anuj kissed Puneet on cheek.

Puneet
Good Night baby.

Anuj goes to Surbhi.

Shreya
Good Night daddy.

Shreya also kisseS Puneet.

Puneet
Good Night darling.

Shreya also goes to Surbhi. Surbhi then takes both of them to their bedroom.

Int. Puneet’s bedroom - Night
We see the clock. It’s 1:00 am in the morning. Puneet is sleeping on his bed. But Surbhi is not there.

Puneet turns to one side. He then gets up and sits on the bed. He takes he bottle from nearby stool and drinks water.
Puneet looks at the bed where Surbhi should have been there. But it is empty.



Puneet
Surbhi……

Puneet (loudly)
Surbhi. Are you in bathroom?

Puneet lies down again in bed. He gets up again after 20 mins and looks into his watch.
Puneet gets up from bed and goes towards gallery.

Puneet
Surbhi…Surbhi..

Int. Gallery/Bathroom - Night
Puneet reaches bathroom and opens the door.
The bathroom is all empty. Puneet is looking worried now.
He turns towards kid’s room.

Puneet
Surbhi.. Surbhi.. where are you?


Int. Gallery/Kid’s room – Night
Puneet opens the door of kid’s room and comes inside. Both kids are sound asleep.
Puneet looks all over the room but Surbhi is not there.
Puneet goes out of the room.

Int. Gallery/Living room - Night
Puneet is walking hurriedly through gallery towards living room.

Puneet
Surbhi.. Surbhi. Where are you yar?

Int. Living room – Night
Puneet searches all over the living room also. He then goes towards guest room.

Int. Guest room - Night
Puneet comes in guest room.

Puneet
Surbhi.. Surbhi..

Puneet searches all over the guest room. He then goes back to living room. He is looking very distressed.



Int. Living room – Night
Puneet is about to open the door to go outside. Just then.

Shreya
Papa

Puneet turns around with surprise.

Shreya
Papa what happened? Where is mummy?

Puneet
Nothing beta. Mummy is here only.
You go to sleep.

Shreya
Where are you going?

Puneet
I am going out for some time.

Shreya
Can I come too.

Puneet.
Beta it’s cold outside. Go back to
sleep. Go. Good girl.

Shreya turns around and goes to her room.
Puneet opens the door and goes out. He runs here and there all over the lawn.

Puneet
Surbhi..Surbhi..
Puneet looks behind the trees and bushes. He then goes behind the house.
Puneet comes back in front of the house after some time.
Both Anuj and Shreya are now standing at the porch.
Puneet comes to them.

Puneet
What happened kids?

Shreya
We can’t sleep.

Anuj
Daddy, where is mummy?

Puneet
She is here only beta. You both
go back to sleep please. I will
bring her back.

Shreya
Have you got fight?

Puneet
No beta. Please go and take Anuj
inside. I am just coming.

Shreya and Anuj turns around.
Just then Shreya looks up at the roof.

Shreya (shouts)
Daddy…

Puneet looks at Shreya. She is pointing her finger at the roof. Puneet looks at the roof.
We see Surbhi standing at the roof.

Puneet
Ok beta, go inside. Both of you.
I and mummy will come.

Shreya and Anuj goes inside house.
Puneet goes towards the stairs and starts climbing to the roof.


Ext. Roof - Night
Puneet comes to Surbhi. Surbhi’s back is towards Puneet. She is looking straight.

Puneet
It’s too much Surbhi. Too much.
What do you think was that?


I searched the entire house. So many bad thoughts were coming to mind. Coudn’t you answer once.
Puneet noticed Surbhi was lost somewhere. She appears unconscious.
Puneet shakes her.

Puneet
Surbhi..Surbhi.. are you listening
to me?

Just then Surbhi startleS as if she wakes up from sleep. Surbhi looks around and then at Puneet.

Surbhi(with surprise)
Puneet. .. why have you brought me
here at this time?

Puneet looks at Surbhi with surprise.

After one week..

Int. Living room - Day
Puneet is lying on sofa reading a newspaper.
Surbhi is putting flowers in the flower-bases.

Puneet
Can I have a cup of tea?

Surbhi
Ya. Just a minute.

Surbhi finishes putting flower in the base and goes to kitchen.

Int. Kitchen – Day
Surbhi takes a pan and put on the gas. She then add two glasses of water followed by tea. She turns on the gas.
Surbhi then looks out of the window. Just then she starts blinking her eyes in strange way. She held her head and huddles back.

Int. Living room – Day
Puneet looks towards kitchen.

                             Puneet
                   Surbhi. What happened to your
                   tea?

Puneet again starts reading the paper.
Puneet then twictches his nose as if smelling something. He then raises his head and smells the air. He threw the paper on floor and gets up. Puneet runs towards the kitchen.

Int. Kitchen - Day
we see the pan on the gas has burned black. A thick smoke is raising from it.
Puneet picks the pan from the gas stove and turns the gas off. He then puts the pan in sink and turn on the tap.

                             Puneet
                   Surbhi..Surbhi..

He looks here and there in the kitchen for Surbhi. He runs out of the kitchen.

                             Puneet
                   Surbhi.. Surbhi…

In fast action we see Puneet search in all the rooms of entire house and keeps calling Surbhi’s name aloud.

Ext. Road through the forest – Day
we see Surbhi walking on the road. Her face has expressions as if she is walking in her sleep.


Ext. Lawn of house – Day
Puneet is climbing the stairs. He reaches the roof and search for Surbhi. But Surbhi is not on the roof.

Ext. Market – Day
Surbhi is still walking through the market.
We see Shreya and Anuj standing on the side waiting for their bus.
Anuj sees Surbhi and flees towards her.

                        Anuj(shouting)
                   Mummy ..Mummy ..

Shreya also notices her mom. She also runs towards her.

                        Shreya
                   Mummy..

Anuj hugs Surbhi. Shreya also hugs Surbhi.

                        Shreya
                   Mummy. Where are you going?

But Surbhi is not listening to her kids.
Shreya shakes her hand vigoursly.

                       
                        Shreya (shouts)
              Mummy. Are you sleeping?

With a startle Surbhi wakes up.
Surbhi looks at her kids and the the place around.

                        Surbhi(with surprise)
              Are! How I came here. I..I was
              making tea only.

Surbhi’s expressions became worried at once.

Ext.Outside house road – Day
Puneet comes and sits in his car. He is about to start the car. Just then he sees Surbhi, Shreya and Anuj coming towards him.
Puneet gets out of the car.

Surbhi and kids reach near Puneet.

                        Puneet
     What is this Surbhi? you could at
     least tell me once if you were going
     to fetch kids.

                        Surbhi(in a low voice)
              I don’t know Puneet. Something is wrong.

Surbhi runs inside the house.
Puneet helds hand of kids and startS towards the house.

Int. Living room - Day
Surbhi is sitting on sofa sadly. Her head is Dr.ooped on her hand. Puneet is sitting on the mat on floor. Puneet takes the hand of Surbhi.

                        Puneet
              Tell me dear. What’s the problem.
              I think you have taken this matter
              very seriously.

                        Surbhi
              I don’t know Puneet. I am really
              very depressed and living in a
              state of confusion.

                        Puneet
              Look money is nothing for me. It’s
              you and kids and our small family
              which matter to me. Just don’t think
              about the past. Think about me and
              kids. You can’t afford to be lost
              like this. Don’t let the
              situation dominate you. Promise me you
              will be cool and calm and never
              think about the past. Just promise me.

                        Surbhi
              Ya Puneet. I will try.

Puneet keeps his second hand over Surbhi’s.

Int. Office/Puneet’s cabin – Day
Puneet is sitting in his cabin with his face hidden in between his hands. Just then Aakash enters.

Puneet lifts his face up.

                        Aakash
              Hey buddy. What’s going on? Is
              everything all right?

                        Puneet
              Ya. Everything all right?

                        Aakash
              I don’t think so. Why are you sitting
              like this then? Tell me what happened?
              You can’t hide it from your friend.

                       
                        Puneet
              Nothing yar. I am worried about Surbhi.

                        Aakash
              Surbhi. What about her?

                        Puneet.
              Well I have told you earlier. She
              has taken the shock to heart. At times
              she gets lost. And starts thinking so
              much that she loseS even the track of time.

                       
                        Aakash
               Oh. Well.. she is very sensitive.

                        Puneet
            That day she went to roof and forget
            when she has come there. And yesterDay
            she forgets that she was making tea and
            went to bring kids home in between.

                        Aakash
            Well it happens sometimes yar. Just tell
            her not to worry much and just relax.
            Why don’t we plan some get togather. It
            will change her mood too. Well this
            weekend you both and kids come to my home
            for dinner.

                        Puneet
            It’s not required yar.

                        Aakash
            It’s required, Gaytri will be very
            happy. She also needs a change.
            When women talk to each other all
            their tension goes away. And its
            long since we have met. So you guys
            are coming.O.K.

                        Puneet
            Well thank you so much Aakash.

                        Aakash
            Hey, no need to say thanks yaar. Just come
            ok.

                        Puneet
            Alright.


                        Aakash
            That’s like a good boy. Now I will go
            and see boss.

Aakash goes out of the cabin.

Int. Aakash house,dining room – Night
Everyone is having candlelight dinner – Puneet, Surbhi, Anuj, Shreya, Aakash and Gaytri.
Gaytri is serving icecream to all.

                        Puneet
            Very nice dinner it was Gaytri.

                       
                        Gaytri
            Oh. Thanks Puneet. After such a long
            time we are having dinner togather.
            Last time it was at your place.

Gaytri passes the icecream on a plate to Surbhi. Surbhi takes the plate.

                        Surbhi
               Really it must be three months.

                        Gaytri
               Ya. Due to that scam…

                        Aakash
               Well no one will talk about that thing.

Aakash put a spoonful of icecream in his mouth.

                        Gaytri
               Oh, ya right. So Anuj want some more.

Gaytri rubbed Anuj’s hair.

                        Anuj
                   Ya.

                       
                        Surbhi
               Hey not too much.

                        Gaytri
               Only one scoop.

Gaytri puts a spoonful in Anuj’s plate. Everyone smiled.

Int. Living room - Night
Puneet and Aakash are sitting on sofa watching TV.
Shreya and Anuj are busy playing games.


                        Aakash
               So everything is ready to go for print.

                        Puneet
              Ya. Shivani has to give me one
              last article she managed with difficulty.

                        Aakash
              Hmm..

Int. Kitchen – Night
Gaytri and Surbhi are cleaning up the plates.


                        Surbhi
              So you did something about I have
              told you.

                        Gaytri
              Ya. Evry test have been taken.
              Reports will come next week.

                        Surbhi
              Ya. It’s high time you guys become
              three.

Gaytri gives a humble smile.

                        Gaytri
              Well now you go and sit outside. I
              will do these.

Gaytri takes the plate from Surbhi.

                        Surbhi
              It’s ok.

                        Gaytri
              No it’s almost over. Go and watch kids.

                       
                        Surbhi (reluctantly)
              Ok.

Surbhi goes out of the kitchen.

Int. Living room – Night
Puneet and Aakash are still watching sports on TV.
Gaytri comes to room. Puneet straightens up.

                        Puneet
              Hey. Is it done?

                       
                        Gaytri
              Ya. So how was your trip to Kerla?

                        Puneet
              It was good.

                        Gaytri
              I was asking Aakash to go there.
              I have never been there.

                        Aakash
              Yar. I wasn’t having vacations.
              otherwise we all could have been
              gone togather.

                        Gaytri
              Let’s see this time. By the way where
              have you sent Surbhi.

                        Aakash
              What do you meant – sent. She
              was with you.

                        Gaytri
              No prank, ok. She came here 15 mins
              ago.

                        Puneet
              No. She hasn’t come.

                        Gaytri(laughingly)
              You all have made this game. Where is
              she hiding?

Gaytri gets up and starts searching Surbhi.

                        Gaytri
              Surbhi..Surbhi..where are you hiding?

Puneet and Aakash looks worried as they both get up.
Aakash goes towards bedroom.

                        Aakash
              Surbhi..Surbhi..

Puneet also goes to one of the room.

                        Puneet
              Surbhi..Surbhi..

Gaytri comes to Aakash and pushes him.

                        Gaytri
              Stop it. Both of you. Don’t you think
              this game is kiddish for adults like us.

Gaytri laughs.
                        Aakash
              Gaytri. It’s not a joke or game.It
              has happened to Surbhi one –two
              times before also.

                        Gaytri
              Are you telling me the truth?

                        Aakash
              Yes dear.

Gaytri too looks worried.
All are searching for Surbhi. Kids are standing on one corner looking at the adults searching for their mom.

After some time Puneet’s cell phones ring. Aakash and Gaytri comes to Puneet.
Puneet picks the phone.
                       
                        Puneet
              Hello.

After some time he disconnects the phone. His face is tensed.
Aakash and Gaytri are looking at him with anticipation. Puneet looks at them.


                        Puneet
              Surbhi is at home. She is fine.

Int. Cafeteria – Day
Puneet and Aakash are sitting. They are sipping coffee.

                        Aakash
              Did Surbhi said anything.

                        Puneet
              Again same. When she came out
              of the kitchen she went lost. She
              had no idea what happened next.

                        Aakash
              How she reached home?

                        Puneet
              She had no idea. But at home when
              she was normal again she was shocked.
              She called me so that we won’t be
              worried and searching for her.

Aakash keeps quiet for some time then speaks.

                        Aakash
              Don’t mind Puneet but I think you
              should seek advice of some psychologist.

Puneet looked at Aakash in awe.
Aakash put his hand on Puneet’s hand.

                        Puneet (in sad voice)
              You think she has gone mad.

                        Aakash
              What yar! Do people see psychologist
              only if they are mad. I am just saying
              she is under lots of stress. Some
              medical help will make her calm.

                        Puneet
              I am sorry yar. I am also losing
              my temper.  I love her so much
              and can’t bear any such thought.

                        Aakash
              I know Puneet.

                       
                        Puneet
              By the way I will think about
              your suggestion. Let’s go now.
Aakash and Puneet gets up and goes out of the cafeteria.
                                               
Ext. Lawn – Day
Puneet is sitting on arm chair in the lawn and reading news paper.
Surbhi comes out of the house. She comes near to Puneet.

                        Surbhi
              I am ready. Let’s go.

Puneet gets up.

                       
                        Puneet
              Have you taken the list.

                        Surbhi
              Yes.

Puneet and Surbhi walks towards the gate where a car is parked.

                        Puneet
              And what about the kids.

                        Surbhi
              We will take them along while
              returning from the mall.
Puneet and Surbhi gets Into the car and Puneet Dr.ives it off.

Int. The mall,confectionary section – Day
Surbhi is picking things. She picks corn flakes, shampoo, soap and puts in the trolly.
Puneet is helping her.

                        Puneet
              Is it all?

                        Surbhi
              Ya. I think so. ok. Take the
              trolly to counter and do the
              biling. I will just come from  
              washroom.


                        Puneet
              Ok.

Surbhi goes back. Puneet pushes the trolly towards billing counter.


Int. The mall, billing counter - Day
Puneet is at the counter. He takes the bill and pay the money.

                        Puneet
              Please make them keep in my car.

                        Counter boy
              Yes Sir. I will send a boy to help
              you.

Int. The mall, near window - Day
Puneet is waiting for the Surbhi.
Just then he happens to look out of the window. He sees Surbhi going out of the mall.


                       
                        Puneet (with surprise)
              Oh no.

Puneet sees Surbhi sitting in some jeep. Surbhi then dives off the jeep.
Puneet runs towards the exit of the mall.
A helper boy comes near the trolly Puneet was holding.

                        The boy (shouts)
              Sir…Sir…your things..

But Puneet keeps running and goes out of the mall.

Ext. The road - Day
Puneet sits in his car and Dr.ives off. He goes after  Surbhi.

Ext. The road – Day, continuing.
We see Surbhi’s jeep crossing an iron bridge. Puneet speeds up. He starts blowing horns too.
The chase continues for three – four minutes.

Ext. A picnic spot – Day
We see Surbhi’s jeep parked on one side of the road. Just then Puneet’s car enters. He stops his car near to the jeep.

Puneet gets down of the car. He looks here and there. Just then he sees Surbhi climbing a small hillock.
Puneet runs towards Surbhi.

                        Puneet (shouts)
              Surbhi. Surbhi. stop. Listen to me.
              Please stop.

Surbhi keeps climbing. Soon she goes out of sight.
Puneet reaches the top of the small hillock.

Ext. A small lake side – Day
Surbhi is now walking near the side of lake.
Puneet reaches near her. Puneet extends his arm and is about to touch surbhi’s shoulder just then Surbhi turns towards Puneet.

                        Surbhi
              Puneet.

There are tears in Surbhi’s eyes.
Puneet keeps his both hands on Surbhi’s shoulders.

                        Puneet
              Surbhi

                       
                        Surbhi
              I did it again.

                        Puneet
              What. It’s ok Surbhi.

                        Surbhi (with pain)
              I think I have got some disease.
              Some some mental disorder.

Tears are rolling down from Surbhi’s eyes.
Puneet hugs Surbhi.


                        Puneet
              It’s not like that dear. You are
              perfectly all right. You are in
              tension because of that incident.
              so sometimes  you feel lost. That’s
              it. There is nothing to worry.

                        Surbhi
              I don’t think so Puneet.
              Tension doesn’t causes such
              behaviour. Something is wrong.

Surbhi sobs in Puneet arms.
Puneet caress her head.

                       
                        Surbhi
              You should take me to some psychiatrist.

                        Puneet
              We will see. Now relax. Just relax.

Puneet and Surbhi keeps standing hugging each other for some time.

Ext. Lakeside – Day
Surbhi and Puneet are sitting on the grass.

                        Surbhi
              You remember this place?

                        Puneet
              Ya. It’s the same place where we
              use to come sometimes. And where
              I  proposed you.

Surbhi smiles and looks at Puneet. Puneet also smiles.

                        Surbhi
              Those were good old days.

                        Puneet
              Ya. Days of our life………

Int. Office, Puneet’s cabin – Day
Puneet is standing near the window. Just then Aakash comes inside the cabin.

Aakash
Ya, Puneet. What’s up?

Puneet turns towards Aakash.

Puneet
Surbhi wants to see some psychologist.

Aakash
Ok.

Puneet
That day you were telling that you know
a good one.

Aakash
Ya. Dr. Ronit. He is very qualified
and competent. Actually one of my
relative’s girl had some problem. They
took her to him. She is absolutely fine.
I have heard good words about him.


Puneet
Ok. Give me his address.

Aakash
Well I will ask my relative. Will phone
you in the evening.

Puneet
Ok.

Aakash
Ok. Now I will leave. Got some work.


Puneet
Ok yar. Thanks a lot.

Aakash
Don’t say thanks. We are friends.

Aakash goes out of the cabin.


Int. Living room – Day
Puneet is in living room packing his briefcase. Just then Surbhi comes with Shreya and Anuj. Surbhi comes to Puneet.


Surbhi
I am ready.

Puneet
Ok. Let’s go.

Puneet, Surbhi, Shreya and Anuj goes out of the house.

Ext. Lawn-Day
Puneet, Surbhi, Shreya and Anuj crosses the lawn and reach their car parked outside. They sit in the car and Puneet Dr.ives off.

Int. Car- Day

Anuj
Daddy where are you taking mummy to?

Puneet
Beta we are going to see a doctor.


Anuj
What has happened to mummy?

Surbhi looks at Anuj sadly.

Puneet
Nothing beta. She will be fine.

Surbhi caresses Anuj’s head.

Surbhi
I am fine beta.


Ext. Aakash house – Day
Aakash is standing outside the gate of his house. Puneet’s car arrives. Puneet stops the car near Aakash.
Aakash opens the front door. Shreya gets down.
Aakash helds her arm.


Aakash
Come beta.

Surbhi opens the back door. And helpS Anuj come out. Aakash helds his arm too.

Aakash
Come come Anuj dear.

Aakash then shuts the door.

Puneet
Ok. Beta. Bye. I will come in
afternoon nd pick you guys. Don’t
bother uncle much. Ok Aakash. Thanks
a lot.


Aakash

Are its nothing. Don’t worry
about them. They will be fine.

Puneet
Ok. Bye.


Shreya and Anuj
Bye daddy. Bye mummy.

Surbhi
Bye children.

Puneet starts Driving the car. Soon it goes out of sight.

Ext. The clinic – Day
we see a sign board which reads – Ronit psychology clinic . Just then Puneet’s car enters. Puneet and Surbhi gets down and goes inside the clinic.

Int. The clinic, reception – Day
At the reception a girl is sitting and working on the computer. Puneet and Surbhi goes towards the receptionist

Puneet
Excuse me.

The receptionist – a young girl, looks up.

Receptionist
Hello sir. How can I help you?

Puneet
We have an appointment with Dr.
Ronit. Can you please check?

Receptionist
Ok Sir. Just a minute.

Receptionist dials a number.


Receptionist
Hello Dr.. A Mr. Puneet and his wife
wishes to see you…(pause).. Ok sir.

Receptionist keeps the receiver down.

Receptionist (with a smile)
Mr. Puneet you may go please.

Puneet and Surbhi goes towards doctor’s office. Puneet pushes the door open and they both goes inside.

Int. Dr. Ronit’s office – Day
we see Dr. Ronit sitting on his chair acroos the table. He is same age of Puneet. He looks tall and handsome.
Puneet and Surbhi comes towards his desk.
Dr. Ronit looks up.

Puneet
Hello Doctor.

Puneet extends his hand.

Puneet
I am Puneet and she is my wife
Surbhi.


Dr. Ronit (with a smile)
Oh hello both of you.

Dr. Ronit shakes hand with Puneet and Surbhi. And indicates towards chair.

Dr. Ronit
Please have a seat. Aakash has
told me about you.

Puneet and Surbhi sits in front of Dr. Ronit.
Dr. Ronit rings a bell. Just then a peon comes in.

Dr. Ronit
Ram bring some coffee.

The peon
Ok. sir.

The peon goes out.

Dr. Ronit
Ok then. What’s the story.
Puneet starts narrating the entire episode which audience doesn’t hear.


Int. Dr. Ronit’s office – Day, continuing
Dr. Ronit, Puneet and Surbhi are sipping coffee.
Dr. Ronit keeps his cup down.

Dr. Ronit
Well there is nothing to worry.I
will have to interview Surbhi in
 detail and in person to reach
the root cause of the problem.
But superficially it appears a
case of short term amnesia or memory
loss. Its not a very serious
problems. Generally under highly
stressful or depressive conditions
some people may develop it. This is
the way of body to cope with stress.
the brain shuts down the memory so that
it can’t remember the particular incident.

Puneet and Surbhi share glances.

Puneet
So is it cureable.


Dr. Ronit
Hundred percent. With proper
counselling it can be cured soon.

Puneet nods.

Dr. Ronit
So Surbhi ji you need a few sessions
of counselling with me. And you will
be perfectly all right. We will
fix a schedule for you. My secretary
will let you know.

Puneet
ok Dr.. thanks a lot for your time.
we will make a move now.

Puneet and Surbhi gets up. Dr. Ronit also gets up.

Dr. Ronit.
Don’t say thanks. It’s my duty.

Dr. Ronit shakes hand with Puneet and Surbhi.
Puneet and Surbhi goes out of the Dr. Ronit’s cabin.



Int. office – Day
Puneet is walking through the corridor. Aakash comes from front.

Aakash
Hey.

Puneet
Hi Aakash.

Aakash starts walking with Puneet.

Aakash
So whats going on?

Puneet
We went to psyhcologist yesterday.

Aakash
Ok. That’s good. So how was it?

Puneet
Doctor seems to be good one.
He said Surbhi developed
short term amnesis due to depression.


Aakash
ok.

Aakash and Puneet reaches Puneet’s cabin.

Puneet opens the cabin door. Both of them goes inside.

Int. Puneet’s cabin – Day
Puneet sits on his chair. Aakash sits in front of him.

Puneet
Doctor  has given schedule. Surbhi
will go tomorrow for a session.

Aakash
Ok. By the way I was thinking we
should take revenge.

Puneet
What!!!

Aakash comes closer to Puneet.

Aakash (in a low voice)
We should give supari of Pramod.


Puneet (with shock)
What? Are you kidding?

Aakash
No. I am serious.

Puneet
You have gone crazy.

Aakash
Yes I have gone. I have lost 20
lakhs.so does you. its not a less
amount for me. and look at the
condition of Surbhi. who is
responsible for all this. we
all are suffering here and that
bastard and his partner are
licking all the cream. I will
do it. I will definitely do it.

Aakash gets up in anager and starts going out.

Puneet
Aakash, listen..

Before Puneet could complete his sentence Aakash goes out of the room.

Ext. House lawn – Day
Puneet Shreya and Anuj all are playing football in the lawn. Just then Surbhi comes out of the house. She is carrying her purse along.


Surbhi
Ok. I am going.

Puneet Shreya and Anuj stops the game and comes to Surbhi.

Anuj
Mummy, where are you going?

Surbhi
I am going to meet doctor beta.

Shreya
what has happened to you mummy?

Surbhi
Nothing much. Just routine check
up. You kids play with your daddy
ok. I will be home soon.



Anuj
Bring us chocolates.

Surbhi (smiles)
Ya sure.

Surbhi kisses Anuj and Shreya.

Surbhi
Ok. Bye.

Anuj and Shreya
Bye mummy.

Puneet
Go carefully.

Surbhi
Ya. Ok then, I leave.

Puneet
Ok. Go safely.

Surbhi goes towards the gate where their car is parked. Surbhi opens the door of the car gets in and drives off.


Int. Dr.Ronit’s office – Day.
Surbhi is sitting in front of Dr.Ronit.

Dr. Ronit
So tell me what exactly happens
when you go in a dream like state.

Surbhi
Well Dr.. it happens randomly and
anytime. Sometimes I am in the
middle of some activity and all
of sudden thoughts of past comes
over and I starts feeling depressed.
it seems .. a black cloud comes
over me and engulfs me inside. After
that I lose track of things. But I
know I start walking and reach at
random places.

Dr. Ronit.
Hmm. Well ok. Exactly since when
you are experiencing these Dr.eam
like walks.

Surbhi
well I think just after that
incident in which my husband
lost 20 lakhs.

Dr. Ronit.
Ok. What are your hobbies?

Surbhi
What? Well I use to draw sketches
during my college.

Dr. Ronit.
Well that’s very nice. Ok. Tell me
what is the value of 20 lakhs according
to you?

Surbhi
Well we are middle class people. 20
lakh was a huge amount.

Dr. Ronit
I am saying what is its value.

Surbhi
It could buy us a big house. A
Dream house…



Dr. Ronit
Dream house. Ok. Good. So you have lost
20 lakhs. Means you have lost a big house.
Ok Surbhi now tell me which thing
has  more value for a child – a big
house or a mother. Let’s assume you are
the child. So which would be
more valuable.

Surbhi
Of course for a child mother is
always important.

Dr. Ronit
If you have to trade for  your
mother’s health nd house which
one will you let go.

Surbhi
Of course. I would always wish
my mother to be healthy.

Dr. Ronit
Exactly. So now you have to relaise
it. Put youself in this situation.
you are a mother. Your kid wants you
to be all well. So you have to
let go those thoughts of loss of 20
lakhs. Chose the fellings of your
chilDr.en towards you

Surbhi looks at the doctor silently.

Dr. Ronit.
You have to let this thing of past
go for the sake of your present and
future – which is your kids
and husband. Think about it. Isn’t
it correct.

Surbhi
Yes, doctor.

Dr. Ronit
Ok good. Now you have to tell
it to subconscious.

Surbhi
Means?

Dr. Ronit
Well if you think about  such
thoughts  again and again in
your mind then it will go to
your subconscious. well it can be
done faster with the help of hypnosis.
so next time we will do a hypnotherapy
session. Ok.

Surbhi
Ok. Doctor.

Dr. Ronit
On next time you come I want you
to bring me sketches of your entire
family playing with you – your
son, daughter and husband spending
time with you. the entire happy family.
ok.

Surbhi nods in yes.

Dr. Ronit.
That’s enough for today. We will
meet next week.


And don’t worry. Very soon you will be as good as ever.

Surbhi
Ok. Doctor. Good bye then.

Dr. Ronit.
Good bye Surbhi.

Surbhi gets up and walks out of the doctor’s office.

Int. Living room – Day
Gaytri is sitting in sofa. She is sipping juice. Surbhi comes with a bowl of chips.


Surbhi
Here. Have some.

Gaytri
Oh, tats not required. Sit.

Surbhi sits and takes her glass of juice.

Ext. Lawn – Day
Puneet and Aakash are sipping their juices.

Aakash
So what have you thought?

Puneet
About what?

Aakash
About supari.

Puneet
Yar. You have gone crazy. We
are not murderes ok.

Aakash
But he has murdered our feelings.

Puneet
Aakash. Yar please stop this.
Come out of it. I already
have enough tension. You have
come up with this bright idea.

Aakash
Ok. Chill. Have juice.

Aakash looks at other side still in anger.

Int. Puneet’s house, living room – Day

Gaytri
Reports have come. My fallopian
tubes are blocked.

Surbhi keeps her hand on Gaytri’s shoulders.

Surbhi
Oh.

Gaytri
Doctor said I have to have
a small operation.

Surbhi
Well don’t worry. Everything
will be alright.

Aakash (V.O)
Gaytri. Now come on. Let’s go.
It’s getting late.

Aakash comes inside. Gaytri keeps her glass down and gets up
Gaytri
Ya. Coming.

Surbhi also gets up.

Surbhi
Aakash. You both should stay for
dinner.

Aakash
Not today Surbhi. Next time.

AAkash and Gaytri goes out. Surbhi follows them.

Ext. Puneet’s house lawn, road - Day
Aakash and Gaytri sits in the car. Puneet and Surbhi waves them good bye. The car then drives off.

Int. Dr. Ronit’s office – Day
We see Surbhi sitting in front of Dr. Ronit.

Dr. Ronit
How’s your dream walks now. Suffered
any in this week.

Surbhi
Ya once. But my husband noticed and
woke me up before I could cross the
lawn.

Dr. Ronit
Well, no worries. They will go. Well
toDay we will do hypnotherapy. Ok.
It’s easy. We will go to other room.
Please come with me.
Dr. Ronit gets up.
Surbhi also gets up and follows the doctor.

Int. Doctor’s room – Day
This is a grand room. Well lit and cozy. In the center there are two chairs without any table.

Dr. Ronit.
Please sit.

Dr. Ronit indicates Surbhi towards chair
Surbhi sits. Dr. Ronit sits in the next chair. He then took a locket and started waving to and fro in front of Surbhi.

Dr. Ronit
Just look at locket. And keep
looking at it. Your eyelids are
becoming heavy. You can’t keep
them open. You are going to
close your eyes at the count of
three 1..2 ..3.

Surbhi closes her eyes.

Dr. Ronit
Now you are very relaxed. You
have no worries. No tensions.
Only happiness. And now you
are ready to tell me everything
I ask.

Camera then moves towards clock.

Ext. Lawn – Evening
Surbhi is watering the plants. Just then she sees someone on the trees. She moves towards the trees.

Surbhi (shouts)
Who is there?

A man jumps from the tree and run away.
Surbhi goes towards gate.

Surbhi
Who is there?

But no one is there. Surbhi turns back.

Int. Dining room – Night
Puneet is on the dining table having dinner.
Surbhi is coming from the kitchen.



Surbhi
Someone was trying to break in
the house.

Puneet

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